Preliminary Exercise Feedback and Learner Response

 Create a new blogpost called ‘Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response’ and then copy in the feedback below. Complete the learner response task below the feedback:

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full. If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog.

1. Preliminary exercise blog and overall production of this exercise have been executed very well and in a very efficient manner – well done for completing this so promptly

2. You have managed to edit your production to a very high level – lots of clever transitions e.g. when the girl matures


2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write two WWW bullet points (What Went Well) and two Next Step bullet points for your preliminary exercise. 
The production was done well and was completed quickly, managed to also edit my coursework in a very high level.

 
3) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project? List three things you have learned or will do differently as a result of this exercise. You may want to comment on organisation, actors, filming, editing or something else entirely but be specific.

WWW:

1. Preliminary exercise blog and overall production of this exercise have been executed very well and in a very efficient manner – well done for completing this so promptly

2. You have managed to edit your production to a very high level – lots of clever transitions e.g. when the girl matures

 

Next steps:

1. Remember the technical elements when filming – not getting in the shots (reflection in the windows on one or two occasions)

2. We’ve already discussed this but consider reshooting so that the young girl is not too young so it would be received more by the intended target audience    

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